For me, the intro is always the easiest part.
Audience Questions:
- How did you decide to use form to present your content in the raw material you’ve shared here? How did the conventions of your chosen genre influence your choices
I had to make a more formal introduction than I did with the other genres.
- How did the production of this raw material go? What kinds of any hiccups, challenges, successes, creative epiphanies, etc. occurred during the process?
I just upon my thesis to form my intro paragraph
Opening section:
Thesis: Gender should be a contributing factor
in a person’s salary.
The fight for women’s rights has been an
ongoing struggle for centuries and will continue to proceed for many more
years. There has been a deficiency in gender equality in many areas big or
small. Recently, an especially prevalent issue has been the gender pay gap. The gender pay gap the average difference
between men and women in the work place.
The average woman only earns 79% of what the average man’s yearly
salary. Women in the work force have made tremendous strides over the past
century; however, there are still significant differences between the payment
of men and women in the work force. It’s clear that women’s rights have notably
increased since the early mid 1900’s and even in recent years, but the gender
pay gap continues to be a considerable form of discrimination towards working
women. Gender should not be a contributing factor into a person’s salary. If a
woman is producing work that is equivalent to a man under the same employer,
the gender of the employee should not lessen that woman’s payment.
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