Editorial Reports

Audience Questions

1. How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

The rough cut was choppy and I needed to do a lot of editing and add music. Some of the transition were a little odd also so I needed to smooth stuff out.

2. How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

Adding the music in made it sound less awkward. I knew I needed to add music so during the pauses it was not awkward.