Peer Review for Veronica Funess

Peer review is extremely helpful. I get to see how others are using their genres uniquely and also get to see how other people decided to do the project.

Audience Question: How did you practice your editorial skills this week in peer review?

I practiced my editorial skills on my own genre first so I could maybe help others working in my same genre to edit their projects.

Author Response:

I thought you content outline was really good and very detailed! It gave me a good understanding of your project and your main points. My first thought when I opened your outline was woah this is so detailed this must have taken so long and then I saw you talked about how you much time you take on your first drafts of your project ahah. Having this detail early on was probably extremely helpful during your writing process. I like how you have all 3 projects set up to show the successes and struggles of them because of your writing habits. I'm excited to view your final project!

Perform the activity and then write a concise but detailed blog post that includes:

• The name of the title and author for the project you reviewed: Veronica Funess Video Reflection Project
• A working hyperlink to the project you reviewed
• An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed: Outlining suggestion. How the detail will be helpful during the writing process
• An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how did you help them make their work better?) : I let her know I liked the content and to keep going in that direction.
• An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback: Being detailed in your writing process is something I learned this semester. I think this is a very good skill Veronica has. If she worries about spending too much time on rough drafts and outlines maybe remain just detailed but do less editing and revisiing until the final cut.
• One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from: Being detailed and concise for my outline I think is very helpful. It gives me a full understanding of what my argument is and allows me to make changes as I look at it as a whole